@kellyn what emotions though?

@kaileek needs more of an argument

In 'The Interlopers' reconciliation helps the reader understand the situational irony for both the outcome's of Ulrich's and Znaeym's fate.

@malloryg but whats the internal conflict?

@kers too in depth..make a little more broad?

@sarac main character description?

@zache thus?

@MeganC really good, because it explains alot. could you possibly make the character description a little more in depth?

@kaileek no literary

@samr It's pretty decent

@samp its not really argumenative

@hyearout make it Literary

In 'The Interlopers' reconciliation helps the reader understand the irony in the outcome of Ulrich and Znaeym's fate.

@SavannaH its good, no LITERARY THOUGH

@malloryg ITS FANTASTIC!! GO MAL!!

@zache its not LITERARY

@kers good

@sarac It's GREAT!

@nateg make it Literary

@MeganC go in a little more description in the death part