hyearout Has situational irony that confuses the character in what is going to happen in the end
@hyearout good try to be more specific (:
@hyearout you still have the 'so what' hanging off the end. Make the thesis more relevant.
@hyearout you could be more specific on the situational irony in the story.
@hyearout Way to broad need to tell how it affects the end and how it confuses the charcter