@MarisaW This might be a little too specific with mentioning the tree falling, and could you write a story all on the tree falling?

@denisev This is a little broad, you could possibly focus in on one or two specific parts.

@samr Sam could you write a whole paper on this, i think it mightbe a little too specific?

@zache Looks good, but what type of character comes out in them?

@malloryg looks good mallory, you have all three parts.

Due to the family feud in the story, we learn there are ways to reconcile such on-going arguements.

@sarac what type of outcome for the characters?

@zache Nicely done Zach.

@nateg This is so much better, but could you write much about their past? They don't say much about it.

@hyearout Hales I would make this less specific because you can't write an essay over this it would only be one paragraph.

@MarisaW This is a very good start but i would add something a little more specific, what type of irony?

Many family feuds have lasting a long time but there are ways to avoid or stop useless ones.

@denisev This is a good way to start, but you need an arguement.

@kellyn this is very good, but after you say this i would add reading this...suspensful, unpredictable part of story or something.

@RahilaL What are you analyzing? And how do you argue about the way a character thinks?

@sarac this is a good thesis but you can't argue about it because at the end there is a fair truce.

@user561442 Many family feuds have lasted a long time but there are ways to stop or avoid useless ones.

@nateg haha that movie is so funny.

@user561442 my favorite movie is The Holiday