@MarisaW I think it is a little too specific and would be hard to write an essay on.
@christines This is good. It uses all 3 parts and would be a good thesis to write a paper on.
@Christenw I like this one a lot. I think that it is a great argument and you dont have to say so what after it.
@darianm This is really really good. It is really analytical and isn't too specific or general.
@kaileek I think you could be a little more specific and talk about the feud a little more so its easier to picture what is going on.
The mood in this story intrigues the reader and keeps them engaged because of all the emotions you get from reading this ambiguous story.
@sarac I think you could be more specific and talk about the outcome a little more. It would make it easier to write a paper about.
@malloryg i think this is really good. It has all the 3 requirements and is very analytical. You aren't too specific or to general.
@nateg I think you have a really good argument, but you could maybe explain it a little better and be more specific.
@MeganC I like this and i think you have a good argument and great analysis.
@kaileek i think you could use more analysis in your thesis and be more specific.
@christines I think that this is really good, it is literary and has a good analysis.
@hyearout I think it is a little too specific and it would be hard to write a paper on it.
@Christenw I think your thesis is really good, it is specific but not so much that you couldn't write an essay over it.
@SydneyG I like your thesis, I think it is very literary and has a good analysis
@RahilaL I htink you need to be more specific, this is really vague and you could go more in depth about it.
The mood in this story intrigues the reader and keeps them engaged because of all the emotions you get from reading this
@zache this is really good. I think there is a good argument
@malloryg I think that this is really good, it has a good argument and it has a good analysis.
@MeganC I like your thesis but i think that it needs to be a little more specific.