@christines it doesn't really answer the so what question.

@hyearout good try to be more specific (:

@darian much better answered the so what question.

@nateg so what how does it effect the story?

When Ulrich and Znaeym expierence trials in 'The Interlopers' their desires for friendship are brought forth thus developing their character

@christines decent thesis, could improve by a short explanation to what irony in the two characters outcome and try to be more argumentative

@darianm Decent maybe try to be more specific and re-word it. : )

@SavannaH Overall pretty good, maybe be more specific as to what the reader assumes

The trials the two characters go through brings out both of their desires for friendship.

I like Star Wars episode V